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Things I liked:
I thought that the camera shots worked well, I thought the 180 degrees turn of the male character doing his tie up looked very effective with the narration, i also thought that when the voice over says black and white and the camera effect changs to black and white it works very well with the theme of dark and horror.
Things we need to improve or change:
I thought the narration got a bit boring, too much talking looses intrest in the film, i also thought the voice didnt sound strong enough to the dialoge as the scene at the begining is quite ordinary there needs something to keep the audience intrested. I feel like the driving to the industrial estate was a bit too long, there was some parts that didnt make sense, if he was supposed to be 'gangster' then his clothing should have been a bit more classy, rather than shirt untucked and more creepy looking which fitted more in with the horror.
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